“Now you to be careful climbing,”said their Mum. So they started to climb up a steep dark hill. Sadly Max slipped and he was falling but luckily he landed on a nearby ledge. He landed on it but he had broken his legs and arms, Terenzo went down the hill to their mum.
Terenzo said “Mum, Max has slipped and he started to fall and landed on a ledge and he broke his arms and legs."
“Oh,no! I will call the hospital,” said mum.
So when the hospital came Terenzo led them to Max and Terezo said, “He has broken his arms and legs."
So the medic took him away in the helicopter to the hospital. The end.So when the hospital came Terenzo led them to Max and Terezo said, “He has broken his arms and legs."
great job Terenzo thank's for putting me in your story I like the bit were you run as fast as you can to tell your mum that I had slipped.
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