Country Life is better than city life - Term 3 Week 4

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing

Success Criteria:

1. I plan for a writing taskbx
2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words.
4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
5. I use capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
6. Use persuasive language

Country life is better than city life.

I strongly believe that country life is better than city life.

First you can have fun and run in fields that have long grass and have fun make stuff like tree houses and boats out of tree bark, dead branches and big leaves and you can float it down the river.

Also you can grow your own crops like tomato, broccoli, carrot, potato, cauliflower, cabbage, peas and corn. In the country you can milk cows and get eggs from chickens and you can feed baby animals and pat them and play with them.

In the country there is fresh air and not very much noise and you can sleep well at night and when you wake and go outside then it is nice fresh air to enjoy and you get to camp in the fields and at night  there is lots of places to hide in when you're playing spotlight.

In the country you can see the sunrise really well and in the middle of the day you can slide down a smooth hill on an old towel fast and you might land in the river, and speaking of the river at night you can fish for eels  and you can make a fire and cook the eels on the fire.

So that why I believe that country life is better than city life.