Friday, May 22, 2015

Icebreaker - Week 5


When you eat my lolly it makes your body heat up like the sun. Whatever you stand on melts. It lasts for a week.
My lolly tastes like brownies in chocolate sauce mixed.  
It looks like the sun being dipped in chocolate sauce.
My lollies name is called Ice Breaker.
It makes a boiling sound on the inside.
The Icebreaker is ($1 for 2 and for 1 you pay 90c).




Thursday, May 21, 2015

The Summarising Strategy - Week 4

KEYWORDS

Keywords are used for information to make sentences.

Keywords can be used in a baking and secrets.                                                

Keywords are in all kinds of stories.                     

If you write a story and you use someone else's sentences or ideas, that is called plagiarism.

Here is an example:
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 
Bird and worm.

A worm came out of the ground and got eaten by a bird.


The green words are the keywords  and the other words are to make the sentence.








Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Writing - Week 3

Rumpelstiltskin

Along time ago, there was a Miller. He was a very boastful man and he had a daughter. 
The next day the Miller was delivering flour to the castle hill and he was boasting like usual to the chamberlain. Then the king over heard it and he said to the chamberlain tomorrow you will go to the mill.  
The next day the miller's daughter saw the king's men coming to the mill. 
"Oh father, what did you say now?" said the daughter.
The miller forgot what he said. The chamberlain said the king wishes for your daughter to go to the castle and make gold out of straw. The miller's daughter grabbed some clothes and she went with the men to the king.
"I have heard that you can turn straw into gold" said the king.  
"I know that my father has been boastful and saying a bit of nonsense," said the daughter. 
"I heard it with my own ears," said the chamberlain. 
Then the chamberlain led the girl to a room full of straw.  The girl was working
all night trying to turn the straw into gold but not a speck of gold showed.
Then at that very second a strange little man appeared in the castle,  she didn't hear anyone come in.  
Do you need any help? 
No one can help me, the king wants me to turn all of this straw into gold. 
Don't worry, I'll do it for you, just go to sleep and don’t worry. 
A little while later the little man woke the girl up and she couldn't believe her eyes. 
What will you pay me? 
The only thing I have is my necklace, and in a flash he grabbed the necklace and he disappeared and she didn't even get to thank him. In the morning the king couldn't believe his eyes. 
You do have a remarkable gift, so the king spent the entire day with the
girl. He thought she was very beautiful and that was not a lie.
The next night the king did another test, the chamberlain took the girl to another room filled with even more straw. A little while later the little man appeared. Should I do the same thing again, its so much fun.
Yes please.
So she went to sleep and the little man woke her up, the job is done.
What will you give me?
A golden ring
And again the little man took the ring and disappeared. The king came in.
Remarkable! So the king spent the entire day with her again. We will do a third test on her and if she suceeds I will let her go.
So the chamberlain led her to the biggest room of all. It was filled top to bottom, when the chamberlain left, she waited until midnight until the little man came.
Do you want me to do the same thing?
Yes said the girl.
So she went to sleep and the little man woke her up, its dawn.
What will you give me?
I have nothing left, nothing for all this work. 
Please, the king promised to let me go. 
Fine, but I want your first born baby when you are queen.
Yes she said, cause she thought that she would never be queen.
So the little man left and the king came in.  
He was amazed, he was so amazed that he asked her to marry him. She thought about the promise but she couldn't say no. So the wedding commenced a year later. The queen had a baby and she had long blonde hair like the queen.
One day when the queen and the baby walked along, the little man appeared.
I'm here to collect my payment.
No you can't take my baby.
But you promised.
Please, no, you can have anything, but not my baby.
Very well, if you can guess my name you can keep your baby. I will give you 3 days.
So the queen called her messengers. Go to the furtherest part of the kingdom and find the weirdest name and report back. So the messengers went left and right and came back.
The next day the little man arrrives.
Have you guessed my name?
Is it Smelly or Heremiclery or Smaleyinkey?
No! No! No! You have two days left now.
So the messengers went back but they had no luck, so the little man came.
Have you guessed?
Is it Jumpey or Cokow or Winy.
No! No! No! You have one day left.
Then two of the messengers came back, we saw a strange little man dancing around a fire singing.
Tomorrow the queen baby will be mine cause she will never guess my name, Rumplestiltskin is my name. Thank the lord of the sun.
So on the last day the little man arrived.
Have you guessed my name?
Is is Tom or Ruby or could it be Rumplestiltskin?
Some told you!
No one told me.
So the little man disappeared and they lived happily ever after.






    

Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Kitten Facts - Week 2

Here is a kitten and here is something about them. Don't pick them up by the ribs because you can kill them or make them mad.
Don't leave them inside when  you are out because it might have an accident.
Kittens eat cat biscuits and milk,  keep them inside at night because it might run on the road and get run over or fall in a hole.